Bad Advertisment Fixed

For my bad advertisement assignment, I received an ad for a massage place in Baton Rouge, Louisiana. The ad was mainly red and had a picture of a couple with bathrobes on going into the massage room. What was special about this ad was that it promoted a Valentine’s Day special going on. At first glance, this ad did not seem too bad, but after some analyzation there were a couple things that needed to be fixed. The picture of the couple seemed a little too provocative for the ad, it seemed like the audience was intruding on their privacy. I fixed this by going to the company’s website and uploading picture that featured two massage tables. The font was a little too small, so I fixed it by adding font that was bolder, giving it a more pronounced look. Finally, I fixed the positioning of the valentine’s Day deals. I moved them to the bottom of the page where it would not be covering up the picture. Overall, there were a few things that I had to fix in order to make this advertisement better.